Nathaniel Ward

Why long sales copy works online

Brian Clark at Copyblogger has the scoop:

Long copy works, because people want as much benefit-oriented information as they personally need to make the purchase.

Some won’t read much of it before buying. Others will read every word.

The key is to make the presentation of this information — your copy and the visual elements of the page — context appropriate. It needs to look and feel like your audience expects content from you to look and feel…

If you try to throw garish colors, exclamation points, and yellow highlighter at your audience when that’s not what they expect to see, you lose. In more ways than one.

 


Friday links: D.C. Council needs to hear conservative policy voices


See A/​B testing in action on Barack Obama’s reelection website

It’s always interesting to see A/​B testing in action.

In 2008, the Obama campaign tested the creative used on its website splash pages to maximize e-mail sign-ups and donations.

President Obama’s reelection campaign is doing the same thing. When you visit BarackObama​.com today, you are automatically redirected to one of several splash pages, each of which has a different layout or call to action.

Variant 1: Campaign button

This simple landing page, decorated with a campaign button, asks site visitors a simple question and invites e-mail signup. If they do not wish to sign up, visitors are offered a bail-out link to the main campaign website.

BarackObama.com splash variant 2

Variant 2: Are you in?

This simple landing page is like Variant 1, only with the campaign logo in place of the button.

BarackObama.com splash variant 2

Variant 3: Are you in?—with the President

A twist on Variant 2, this page includes a large photo of President Obama overlaid in front of the signup form.

BarackObama.com splash variant 3

Variant 4: 2012 starts here—I’m in

This page swaps out the “Are you in?” question for a statement.

BarackObama.com splash variant 4

Variant 5: 2012 starts here—let’s go

Continuing the evolution begun in Variant 4, this one replaces the submission button text so it reads “let’s go!”

BarackObama.com splash variant 5

Variant 6: Fired up?—let’s go

This next variant again changes the main call to action, once again asking visitors a question.

BarackObama.com splash variant 6

Variant 7: Are you in?—no bailout

This one returns to the simplicity of Variant 2, but drops the “continue to website” bailout link that allows visitors to skip this splash page.

BarackObama.com splash variant 7

Variant 8: Sign up

Variant 8 tests some drier but perhaps more effective copy: “sign up for campaign updates” with a generic “submit” button. Sometimes being straightforward is best.

BarackObama.com splash variant 8

Variant 9: Be the first to know

This landing page variant makes site visitors an offer of exclusive information: “be the first to know.” The submission button now reads “sign up.”

BarackObama.com splash variant 9

Variant 10: Help build this campaign

Variant ten, in turn, appeals to visitors’ belief in the campaign’s mission and invites them to “help build this campaign.” The “from the ground up” and “join us” language suggests a certain exclusivity.

BarackObama.com splash variant 10

Variant 11: Are you in?—photo background

This is a very different take on the landing page, including a large photo of the President and a much smaller signup form using language from Variant 2.

BarackObama.com splash variant 11

Variant 12: Are you in?—photo background, take 2

Modifying Variant 12 slightly, this version includes the exclusive offer also seen in Variant 9.

BarackObama.com splash variant 12

Variant 13: Are you in?—photo background, take 3

Another take on Variant 11, this one repeats Variant 8’s to-the-point “sign up for campaign updates.”

BarackObama.com splash variant 13


Wednesday links: Rule of law and the zoning code


Good snark about federal regulations

Kevin Williamson wades into Regulations​.gov and delivers up this commentary:

The Federal Register, within living memory about the size of a family Bible, today takes up about 30 feet of shelf space.

Out of these millions of words of small-print lawyerese, Obama’s regulatory czar, Cass Sunstein, has identified about 30 regulations he’d like to see repealed, as part of a review of regulations mandated by an executive order. That’s nice.